Tonowari relationship[]
Just something I noticed. I am not able to edit unfortunately. Under Family --> Tonowari the grammar is incorrect and confusing. I currently reads as follows:
"Not much is known about Tsireya's relationship with his father, but he seems to be close to him, and respect him although his father also seems to be severe with him when he does something that is not right, Like when Tsireya witnesses how Lo'ak ties up with Payakan along with Aonung, Rotxo and Neteyam so she is severely scolded, but despite that, it shows how much he loves Tsireya When he finds out that he is in danger with his brother Aonung, he decides to go save him along with his wife Ronal"
My suggested updated version is as follows:
"Not much is known about Tsireya's relationship with her father, although she seems to be close to him and respect him. Her father is shown to be strict with her when she does something that he considers not right, like when Tsireya along with Aonung, Rotxo and Neteyam, witness Lo'ak bonding with Payakan. As a result, Tonowari severely scolds her. He is shown to be a loving father he finds out that Tsireya and her brother Aonung are in danger, he decides to go save him along with his wife Ronal."
- Someone already changed that section in the meantime. Did you just register your account? It takes a few days before new users can edit semi-protected articles. It's part of Fandom's spam protection. Please sign posts on talk pages with four tilde characters like this ~~~~ Faern. (talk) Policies 11:04, 11 January 2023 (UTC)